Monday, December 5, 2011

Senryu

ともだちの
はなをください
キレイです

あかいです
チリソースです
ファイアです!

ぎゅうにゅうを
のみましたでも
フルイです。

4 comments:

  1. すきです!いいですね。
    It is very clean and easy to understand. I was just wondering about the reason you used キレイ instead of きれい. It makes me pay attention to it, but its funny because I think the hirigana is actually prettier than the katakana. The rest of the poems have a good use of katakana.

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  2. チリソースガとてもすきです。つらいですね。

    It was a fun read, I definitely can relate.

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  3. おもしろいですよ。

    They were funny!

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  4. あなたのせんりゅがとてもうきです。いいですね。

    The senryu were nice to read and funny as well. I saw that you used katakana mainly for emphasis. It made your poems flow very well. Good job!

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